Pleased Steps


Senitmental is how she felt nineteen years ago todayย 


Ernestly she tried to hold onto that moment in timeย 


Never wanting it to end, because it was so preciousย 


The joy in her heart was more than she could believe


Is this what love is supposed to feel like


Might this capture a glimpse of our Father’s love for usย 





Either way, all she knows is that, the youngest part of her heart turnedย 


Nineteen today and that is reason a for sentimental-ness


Today’s assignment for us all is to be sentimental and compassionate to oneย 


Another. It is our sole purpose in this life of ours toย 


Live free and to love on purpose



Remember to Live Free andย Love On Purpose ๐Ÿ’‹๐ŸŽ‰โœŒ

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60 Comments

  1. I love the structure and flow of your poem. It was truly beautiful! I’ve read a couple of your posts and you’re very thoughtful and I appreciate reading your work.

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  2. You have a wonderful way with words and I thoroughly enjoy reading your inspired posts. Keep it up!

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  3. Awww, is this poem style called an acrostic? I remember studying it in school but I was never really good at it, so I admire the way you crafted this! And happy 19th to your daughter!!

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  4. What a lovely birthday gift to your daughter. This poem is something she can remember forever and always read and think of you. It is a really lovely poem and I love how you structured it.

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  5. Such a lovely poem. So well written and it read so well. I can only wish to have written talent like that.

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  6. Really nice poem…made me think about my own family: my mother and how sentimental the relationship is.

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  7. Beautiful job in using sentimental create a great poem. I haven’t been reading poetry lately. I need to add that to my self-care routine.

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  8. Lovely poem, very beautiful words and I like how they tie together at the beginning, writing “sentiment” on horizontal

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  9. This is a great poem or elegant way to express your thoughts. Sometimes life causes us to feel sentimental and think back over life and what we’ve done.

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  10. Thank you Keiayra. I love the ‘mermaid’ part ๐Ÿ˜‰ Sometimes we have to be reminded to stop and remember the good that life brings. Thank you for stopping by ๐Ÿ˜‰ Have a great day

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  11. I think this was well-wrtiten and to the point. I sometimes find myself trying to relive sentimental moments from six years ago today. Time and life happens, and it almost numbs those aspects. Cheers to the new senitmentals!

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  12. Lovely poem , lovely post , lovely site all together . Had to give you a 5 star ranking for your daughter’s birthday . Thanks for sharing the love โค

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